我們聽了一場關(guān)于“突擊訓(xùn)練作文”的演講讓我們思考了很多,作文能力對(duì)于學(xué)業(yè)職業(yè)都具有重要意義,寫作像是一盞明燈照亮了我們?cè)诔鞘猩踔潦巧钪兴允У姆较?。好的作文是值得被人們長期閱讀的,怎么寫出一片優(yōu)秀的作文呢?
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At present,playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people,especially with school students. Take Tom and Mike for example. Every day after school,they go to the computer bar to play games till late at night, and they often have a competition to see who wins more scores.
Once,Tom didn't go home until eleven o'clock at night. When he got home,he told his mother that he had been going over his lessons. Poor mom!She believed him and cooked two eggs for him. "Take more care of yourself as you work too hard,my dear son." But Tom's face turned red at his mother's praise. Later he made up his mind to work really hard.
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Dear Mary,
This city has changed a lot in the past 5 years. First,more high buildings have appeared,which are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have been set up,so it has become very convenient for people to travel. Besides,many families have got cars of their own. The people's life here has become rich and colorful. People can enjoy themselves travelling on holidays. To my delight,I can taste delicious food of different countries such as the food of America,Japan and South Korea. And now it is easier for me to keep in touch with you than last time,for I can email you in my office.
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A man is using water as much as he likes washing his clothes regardless of the notice pinned above "Save the water Please."(人們隨心所欲的用水洗衣服,毫不在意“請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水”的標(biāo)牌。)
As we see,water is the source of life. But there is very limited available water resources in our world,so we shouldn't waste it. Of course,we have to use it to drink,cook,wash,clean and etc. But we must remember not to use it extravagantly. If we didn't stop such wasteful habits,we would cut off the development of the world and the human life. And what will our next generation use?
假設(shè)你叫李華,你的加拿大筆友James 想了解一下你參加2005年全國中學(xué)生英語夏令營的有關(guān)信息,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的海報(bào)給他寫一封信,談?wù)動(dòng)嘘P(guān)情況和活動(dòng)意義,并邀請(qǐng)他參加你們的活動(dòng)。
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Dear James,
Nice to hear from you again. As you know, this summer vacation,at the end of July,2005,we winners of NEPC will go to a four-day English Summer Camp in Dalian. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia will join us. In the camp, we will have some English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Dalian. Besides,we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English. I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
今天,唐老師來了一次突擊訓(xùn)練,練習(xí)我們的整隊(duì)和整理書包,搞得我們手忙腳亂,亂了方寸。
下午最后一節(jié)課,唐老師先讓我們把書包里的書全部倒出來,并整理好。這使我丈二的和尚摸不著頭腦,唐老師又想搞什么名堂,她那么多的點(diǎn)子,可以去拿世界級(jí)的諾貝爾智力獎(jiǎng)了。雖然不明白為什么這么做,但我還是照辦了。我把書包里的書都倒出來,并整理好。當(dāng)我把書都堆成一摞時(shí),唐老師拿起我的一疊作業(yè)本,我被老師的這一舉動(dòng)嚇壞了,心里有一塊大石頭懸著。
這時(shí),唐老師說:有必要帶這么多本子嗎?下次把不用的本子放在家里,不用帶來了。我聽了,若有所悟地點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。老師把本子還給我后,就讓我們把書都收進(jìn)書包里,然后演習(xí)一遍交作業(yè)時(shí)的情景,但是必須在六十秒內(nèi)完成。剛下完命令,老師就下令開始了。我還沒回過神來,見同桌開始整理書包,這才開始行動(dòng),我先將書放進(jìn)書包內(nèi),從高到矮來排序,然后在上面放上文具盒。整理好書包后,我趕忙開始交作業(yè),我先翻到做的那一頁,然后放到相應(yīng)的地點(diǎn),把作業(yè)交好后,我又坐端正拿出語文書,假裝讀書。隨后我們把作業(yè)收回來。最后,老師讓我們出去整隊(duì),并請(qǐng)一位同學(xué)來演示一遍,。看完了演示,我們紛紛效仿,很快就交好作業(yè),開始假裝讀書。就這樣,一節(jié)課結(jié)束了,我們也學(xué)到了不少生活常識(shí)。
突擊訓(xùn)練,練出了效果,練出了智慧。
這是一篇看圖作文,作文體裁夾敘夾議,先描寫圖畫內(nèi)容,人們?yōu)E伐森林,造成水土流失,導(dǎo)致沙丘、沙塵暴的產(chǎn)生,人們重新植樹,有效抵制沙丘的'進(jìn)攻;再議論圖畫所暗示的深刻含義,呼吁人們重視生態(tài)平衡。
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As is shown in the pictures,trees play an important part in water and soil conservation. In the left picture, people are fleeing from sand dunes because they cut down all trees. In the right picture, people have planted many trees and the sand has retreated.
People should realize the important relation between human and nature. If we continue to destroy forests, destroy the balance of nature, the real victims will be us humans.
It's never too late to mend. After suffering from sand storms, people have now realized the importance of trees in water and soil conservation. They are planting more and more trees to fight against the greedy desert.
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